Discuss what you think are the key differences and benefits of poetry that is “transparent” versus poetry that is “opaque”

In my second tutorial on Australian Literature, we were introduced to the concept of ‘transparent’ poetry as opposed to poetry that is ‘opaque’. Transparent poetry is much easier to comprehend as it is straightforward. We are able to gather the meaning behind transparent poetry relatively quickly as it is usually explicitly stated. This was evident when we read Lisa Bellear’s ‘Woman of the Dreaming’ which explores the notion of being unable to find the soul and our necessity to reclaim our spirit. The poem instantly addresses this idea as Bellear begins with “my sweet woman of the Dreaming, where is your soul, I need to surround your body with my spirit, the spirit of the embodiment of love, anger, pain…” elucidating how being open to emotions allow us to rediscover our spirit and soul. This message is further established throughout the rest of the poem, however, due to the transparency of Bellear’s writing, we were able to gather the meaning behind the poem within the first stanza. To contrast, Judith Wright’s poem, ‘Niggers Leap, New England’ was deliberately elusive and what we would call opaque poetry. Subsequently, I had to think a lot harder to gather what the poem was trying to convey. Wright brings attention to the exploitation and suffering that the Aboriginal people have faced through profound metaphoric and symbolic language. For example, “did we not know their blood channelled our rivers, and the black dust our crops ate was their dust?” refers to how the Aboriginal people were killed on the environment we eat and drink from, hence why she says that we eat their dust. Therefore, Wright’s poem is an explicit example of opaque poetry as we have to deconstruct the poem before we can be enlightened by it’s message.

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  1. Peer review: I chose to read Anna’s piece on Transparent vs Opaque poetry. I really liked how she not only clarified the meanings of each poem, but gave examples through texts that we have studied in the unit. I enjoyed the end sentence “…we have to deconstruct the poem before we can be enlightened by its message” as I feel this really encaptures the meaning of Opaque poetry in a few short words. Her quick and sharp analysis of both poems, accompanied with a short quote, made for an enjoyable read. To improve, I would suggest splitting the 1 paragraph into 2 paragraphs, 1 for transparent and 1 for opaque, to make it a bit easier on the eyes. All in all, a great piece of writing

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