Link to Teneille’s Blog: https://thebestofliterature.art.blog/2019/09/05/the-return-of-the-sun/

First of all, WOW! I really enjoyed reading this poem and I think you did such an amazing job. I love the way you personify nature and refer to the sun as ‘you’, it really amplifies this connection that you have with nature and your love for Summer. Also, great job at embodying typically Dickinson poetic devices and similar structural choices, evident through the length of the poem, constant dashes and highly figurative language. Dickinson’s poems can be quite opaque so I think adding a bit more depth to your poem and making the reader work a little harder to figure out the meaning would make this even better. Overall, I think this is one of your best blogs, and my only advice would be to try and use the same level of creativity throughout your other blogs, and continue to experiment with different literary forms as it makes for a great read!