Link to Izabela’s Blog: https://bellablogs98.wordpress.com/2018/10/12/week-10-weeping-skies/

First off, great job! I really enjoyed reading your blog this week. You are very creative and it really shows through your poem. I like the way you continuously use highly figurative language throughout your poem, specifically “the sky, weeping in Spring” as it helps to visualise what you are describing, painting a picture for the reader. I thought that your word choices were also really good and added to the poem in a positive way, such as “the bats elbowing their way out of the trickling downpour”, making it unique and enjoyable to read. I don’t think any fixes need to be made, although I would have loved to read even more of this so perhaps working to lengthen your poem? Overall, great blog! 🙂