Link to Teneille’s Blog: https://thebestofliterature.art.blog/2020/08/25/a-picasso-cake/

Hi Teneille,
I really loved your blog this week! I was immediately intrigued to see how you were going to explore Picasso’s painting and you do this brilliantly through the ongoing metaphor of cake. I especially like how you refer to the colours, textures and details of the painting as ‘ingredients’ and how it takes time for them to become a cake after being mixed together, just like Picasso’s painting that at first glance can be overwhelming, but when you look closely you can see the image start to form. My only piece of feedback is to watch your grammar and word choices in some parts of the blog. For example, the wording choice of ‘bountiful’ in “a bountiful of flavour-some ingredients” does not make for a very cohesive sentence. Nonetheless, the overall idea and symbolism behind the blog was great and I really enjoyed reading it 🙂