Link to Teneille’s Blog: https://thebestofliterature.art.blog/2019/08/18/the-rink/

I really enjoyed reading Teneille’s blog this week as I thought it was a very original and creative interpretation of the question. Her response was able to elucidate a clear emotional attachment to the place where she grew up, yet she did this through a profound use of figurative language. I was able to clearly visualise what she was describing as she takes time to really describe each detail of ‘the rink’ as well as how she felt whilst being there. I think it would be interesting for Teneille to experiment with her writing as she is very creative and obviously has potential to write unique pieces of work. For this reason, I would have loved to see this in the form of a poem or another text type. Overall, she did a really good job and I look forward to reading more of her blogs.